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-rw-r--r--Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst14
-rw-r--r--Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst15
2 files changed, 15 insertions, 14 deletions
diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
index cb4b78468a93..cb178e0a6208 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
@@ -349,12 +349,14 @@ again.
.. _submit_improvements_qbtl:
-Did you run into trouble following any of the above steps that is not cleared up
-by the reference section below? Or do you have ideas how to improve the text?
-Then please take a moment of your time and let the maintainer of this document
-know by email (Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>), ideally while CCing the
-Linux docs mailing list (linux-doc@vger.kernel.org). Such feedback is vital to
-improve this document further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
+Did you run into trouble following the step-by-step guide not cleared up by the
+reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas on how to
+improve the guide?
+
+If any of that applies, please let the developers know by sending a short note
+or a patch to Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info> while ideally CCing the
+public Linux docs mailing list <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>. Such feedback is
+vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
enable more people to master the task described here.
Reference section for the step-by-step guide
diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
index d83601f2a459..7d38393f31fb 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
@@ -1062,16 +1062,15 @@ Conclusion
You have reached the end of the step-by-step guide.
-Did you run into trouble following any of the above steps not cleared up by the
-reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas how to
+Did you run into trouble following the step-by-step guide not cleared up by the
+reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas on how to
improve the guide?
-If any of that applies, please take a moment and let the maintainer of this
-document know by email (Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>), ideally while
-CCing the Linux docs mailing list (linux-doc@vger.kernel.org). Such feedback is
-vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it
-will enable more people to master the task described here -- and hopefully also
-improve similar guides inspired by this one.
+If any of that applies, please let the developers know by sending a short note
+or a patch to Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info> while ideally CCing the
+public Linux docs mailing list <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>. Such feedback is
+vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
+enable more people to master the task described here.
Reference section for the step-by-step guide